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DarkStar






PostPosted: 16 Mar 2005 20:38    Post subject: A Poem Reply with quote

The darkness consumes all.
My crystal tear reflects up.
Piercing the sky,
It cracks, shattering the glass.
The darkness has been delivered,
to its master.

This is the end,
we shall never meet again.
For I am dead,
I have been consumed.


[EDIT

It is me BORAT!]

lol.

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purplenewrocks






PostPosted: 17 Mar 2005 05:26    Post subject: Re: A Poem Reply with quote

Oh.

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spo0n






PostPosted: 18 Mar 2005 10:23    Post subject: Re: A Poem Reply with quote

how very... err.... creative of you...
please be quiet now and dont do that again.

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youngGothicPixie






PostPosted: 19 Mar 2005 13:14    Post subject: Re: A Poem Reply with quote

I think there should be an international...no UNIVERSAL ban on Goth Poetry...for the sake
of all..

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spo0n






PostPosted: 21 Mar 2005 10:08    Post subject: Re: A Poem Reply with quote

yes. definitely. without a doubt. goth poetry is like one of those things that you feel
dumber for having viewed it. kinda like passions.

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miss1molko






PostPosted: 05 Nov 2005 16:43    Post subject: Re: A Poem Reply with quote

haha passions is awesome!

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weebo






PostPosted: 21 Mar 2005 15:10    Post subject: A Poem Reply with quote

DarkStar .... piss off you damn babybat. your lameness isn't even worth my urine let alone
time... and i think i can safely speak for everyone here when i say this.

"shut the hell up you worthless maggot, i find christians less irritating than you"

- weebo

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weebo






PostPosted: 22 Mar 2005 16:55    Post subject: A Poem Reply with quote

another one is coffin bopper =P

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DarkStar






PostPosted: 03 Apr 2005 06:17    Post subject: Re: A Poem Reply with quote

Weebo.

I find your atitude confusing.

Why do you feel the need to speak for everyone?

Is it because you have an overly large ego/

OR HAS THE DARKNESS CONSUMED YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



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weebo






PostPosted: 03 Apr 2005 09:17    Post subject: Re: A Poem Reply with quote

or maybe its because your mindless rambles are just plain stupid and im sick of little
roaches such as yourself trying to be "dark and necro" because your angry at the world
because you never get your own way... i have a strange feeling you have never even been
laid lol

- weebo

(Oh and DarkStar your sister doesnt count.)

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DarkStar






PostPosted: 03 Apr 2005 16:40    Post subject: Re: A Poem Reply with quote

i'm way dark. Last night i looked unto the stars and lamented humanity's weak existance.

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weebo






PostPosted: 04 Apr 2005 18:50    Post subject: A Poem Reply with quote

... you got the shit kicked out of you in high school didnt you... or didnt your mommy and
daddy by you that pony you asked for at x-mas???


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DarkStar






PostPosted: 05 Apr 2005 01:18    Post subject: Re: A Poem Reply with quote

If the moon were to crash into the night sky, a soft crystal nectarine would reflect.

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Spiderkitten






PostPosted: 05 Apr 2005 17:41    Post subject: Re: A Poem Reply with quote

*sigh* Gee and now we're arguing who can be goth and who can't......dang next I know we'll
be arging cloths and hair....Oh goody.

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vampy_kat






PostPosted: 06 Apr 2005 11:22    Post subject: Re: A Poem Reply with quote

cool poem

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spo0n






PostPosted: 08 Apr 2005 14:25    Post subject: Re: A Poem Reply with quote

Darkstar, i personally don't give a shit what you do. philosphise all you want about the
moon, and be all poetic all you want. hey why not turn your poem into a song, i'm sure
it'd be a hit with the emos. i really don't give a shit.
what i do care about, is little teen rebel fucknuts like you uunbeautifying the
entertaining antics and conversations of the intelligent people here, with you stupid
attempts to prove yourself to some non-apparent observer who you seem to think will nod
his head and pass you a life time goth membership card.
your a try-hard, who doesnt realise how pathetic he is. i'm not trying to crush your
fragile little heart, i'm trying to be honest. shut the hell up. no one here really wants
to read anything you have to say. when you post on here, not only to you waste our time,
and hurt our brains as we try to comprehend why you continue to paint a picture of
yourself that half of us will hate and want to stab you for, and the other half will just
ignore. perhaps your a masochist and thats why you keep doing it. perhaps you're just
yearning acceptance. perhaps you didn't get hungry hungry hippos one year for your
birthday and so vowed to rebel against the evil conformist world. who knows. and more, who
cares.
my point put bluntly; please, if you insist on posting here, make it something
intelligent. i come to this forum to share common interests, so far, the only way i see
you contributing to that is by us all wanting to permanantly disable you in some way
involving a coat hanger.
if i hurt your feelings, im sure you could go write a poem about it.
just don't post that mindless, uncreative sheep drivel on here. and stop trying to prove
yourself. it is rather irritating, like a cow gnawing your foot off.

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vampy_kat






PostPosted: 08 Apr 2005 14:37    Post subject: Re: A Poem Reply with quote

Self expression is important. All poetry is beautiful. Poetry is gorgeous self-expression.
Many people are afraid to post a poem on a message board. It takes courage. Many people
are even to embarrassed to write peotry by themselves. I think it gives us an awareness of
our own identity and helps understand how we tick. It takes a long time for someone to
discover themselves, poetry just gives us a helping hand. I love living in a world full of
writing and music, it creates an undeniable connection between all human beings. Poets and
songwriters unite! LOL. Incidently some of the funniest poems I have ever read have been
written by people when they are completely off their face. Riders on the Storm.

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mr_fear






PostPosted: 08 Apr 2005 14:41    Post subject: Re: A Poem Reply with quote

vampy_kat i couldnt have said it better my self

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spo0n






PostPosted: 08 Apr 2005 14:44    Post subject: Re: A Poem Reply with quote

maybe your right. but if one sucks at writing poetry, then they should stop, or at least
do it in private while honing their limited skills. shit like that hurts my brain and my
soul. its like anti-culture. its the same shit you see come out of the mopey fucktards (i
love that word) whose lives seem to revolve around who has the shittest life, or whose
soul is deeper into an abyss, and whose abyss is the biggest and blackest, blah blah
blah.
if you wanna write poetry, do it in private. then if its any good, it can be made public
when you die, or an evil ex comes and steals your little book of poems.
point: we don't want to hear it. if we did, this would be the "dark culture forum".
it isnt

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DarkStar






PostPosted: 08 Apr 2005 23:47    Post subject: Re: A Poem Reply with quote

Poetry = expression
Expression = freedom
Poetry enables a trapped soul to express...and therefore free itself.

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weebo






PostPosted: 10 Apr 2005 12:50    Post subject: A Poem Reply with quote

one thing most of you are all forgetting... this is not a god damn poet forum.

this forum is about people, whats on around the world, intresting links, your veiws, and
music .

if no one give a crap about how you feel, DEAL WITH IT.

most of you try to express yourself in a place you hold no ground in.

- weebo


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youngGothicPixie






PostPosted: 11 Apr 2005 06:12    Post subject: Re: A Poem Reply with quote

Since when did Uber babybats take over this forum?

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mr_fear






PostPosted: 11 Apr 2005 14:27    Post subject: Re: A Poem Reply with quote

darkstar aside from what anyone else thinks your poetry rocks and id like to see more of
it!


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r_ush






PostPosted: 22 Apr 2005 23:42    Post subject: Re: A Poem Reply with quote

that's beautiful

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DarkStar






PostPosted: 27 Apr 2005 17:03    Post subject: Re: A Poem Reply with quote

Why thankyou. This poem was delivered unto me in the dark night by death, my dark master.

Pfffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff.

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black_rose_lilly






PostPosted: 10 Sep 2005 03:42    Post subject: Re: A Poem Reply with quote

shady eyes
from the girl who ran away
i cried my self to sleep
as i watched them
carry her body away
as mangled as i saw
from where i stood i could do nothing...

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DarkStar






PostPosted: 12 Sep 2005 04:43    Post subject: Re: A Poem Reply with quote

Whoah. Cool Poem. Lets write a book.

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black_rose_lilly






PostPosted: 13 Sep 2005 03:52    Post subject: Re: A Poem Reply with quote

really thanks.... i quess. i'm kinda regected because of my poems they say the are too
depressing(because i live a depressing life duh!) so it's a hobby i have tons that no one
wants to read and i keep them in my room to look at and if i think they are good i'll post
them.

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weebo






PostPosted: 15 Sep 2005 18:19    Post subject: Re: A Poem Reply with quote

SHUT THE FUCK UP

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weebo






PostPosted: 16 Sep 2005 16:43    Post subject: Re: A Poem Reply with quote

*raises his hand*

im up for a board of their very own.

(but then i wont have as many people to abuse) icon_sad.gif

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black_rose_lilly






PostPosted: 17 Sep 2005 03:11    Post subject: Re: A Poem Reply with quote

i only do two poems on a site then i'm done thats how i am but if you want to talk about
something i'm all open......

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sexypartygirl






PostPosted: 21 Sep 2005 04:29    Post subject: Re: A Poem Reply with quote

thats a weird poem do ya have anything a little more that sounds like i'm not about to rip
my own heart out just a suggestion

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weebo






PostPosted: 21 Sep 2005 16:05    Post subject: Re: A Poem Reply with quote

... need i rant any more?

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weebo






PostPosted: 22 Sep 2005 09:31    Post subject: A Poem Reply with quote

please keep your clothes on in the pic...

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sexypartygirl






PostPosted: 23 Sep 2005 03:30    Post subject: Re: A Poem Reply with quote

be happy i took that picture yesterday





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DarkStar






PostPosted: 23 Sep 2005 04:01    Post subject: Re: A Poem Reply with quote

eheheheheheheheheheh. Your face is so funny. Thanks.

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weebo






PostPosted: 23 Sep 2005 07:31    Post subject: A Poem Reply with quote

*falls out of his chair with laughter*

attention attention that photo is a perfect example of a babyhieb...



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DeadPunk






PostPosted: 23 Sep 2005 11:49    Post subject: Re: A Poem Reply with quote

Now this is just a guess but i'm thinking the lights were out when you attempted the
makeup???

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weebo






PostPosted: 23 Sep 2005 18:06    Post subject: A Poem Reply with quote

actuly not being mean (for once) i honestly dont think she is attractive in any way shape
or form... the make up just makes me laugh.

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DarkStar






PostPosted: 23 Sep 2005 22:21    Post subject: Re: A Poem Reply with quote

That's not being mean?

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black_rose_lilly






PostPosted: 26 Sep 2005 21:54    Post subject: Re: A Poem Reply with quote

no i actually did the make up and took the pic for humiliation and she kept it it's going
in our yearbook hahahahaha

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DeadPunk






PostPosted: 26 Sep 2005 22:18    Post subject: A Poem Reply with quote

I seriously think they are the same person..


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purplenewrocks






PostPosted: 27 Sep 2005 01:31    Post subject: Re: A Poem Reply with quote

Grazie. She's not though... *smirks in sarcasm* Kidding.
Will have to start another picture thread soon i think. icon_smile.gif

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black_rose_lilly






PostPosted: 27 Sep 2005 04:13    Post subject: Re: A Poem Reply with quote

no this is me!!!!!





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black_rose_lilly






PostPosted: 27 Sep 2005 04:16    Post subject: Re: A Poem Reply with quote

oops sorry here





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DeadPunk






PostPosted: 27 Sep 2005 09:27    Post subject: A Poem Reply with quote

It didn't work yet Purple..
For being in error I apologize, it's just that I could have sworn you 2 were the same
person the way you were talking..


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black_rose_lilly






PostPosted: 30 Sep 2005 03:15    Post subject: Re: A Poem Reply with quote

the only reason is that were best friends so we kinda act the same other than the fact
that we saved eachother's asses everyday were cool.....

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weebo






PostPosted: 30 Sep 2005 15:14    Post subject: Re: A Poem Reply with quote

i think your full of bullshit...

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sexypartygirl






PostPosted: 01 Oct 2005 03:15    Post subject: Re: A Poem Reply with quote

what she means is that i have covered for her when she ditches and she helps tutor me.....


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weebo






PostPosted: 01 Oct 2005 12:33    Post subject: Re: A Poem Reply with quote

... i fucking hate you.

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weebo






PostPosted: 03 Oct 2005 16:47    Post subject: A Poem Reply with quote

no i think its just a case of she's actuly realy realy stupid...

anyway... one of my freinds recently grabbed the web adress of this site off me... so
things could end up being rather funny icon_razz.gif

he also enjoys a good flame war *nods*

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DeadPunk






PostPosted: 03 Oct 2005 17:11    Post subject: A Poem Reply with quote

Things are going to warm up around here I think..

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sexypartygirl






PostPosted: 03 Oct 2005 21:54    Post subject: Re: A Poem Reply with quote

O_o.......... I'm trying to be nice and still people fucking hate me..........i'm so
confused!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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weebo






PostPosted: 04 Oct 2005 12:51    Post subject: Re: A Poem Reply with quote

Shut the fuck up sexypartygirl your a fucking moron that should have been killed at
birth.

The problem with you is you're a fucking try hard loser that really bugs me. If you
managed to have been born with maybe one or two brain cells more than you currently show I
would probly have managed to hold a semi-polite convo with you. Your happy and perky spin
of everything makes me think of ripping your guts out with an A4 piece of paper...
honestly unless you're going to say something that's actually has something to do with
what we are talking about or even something that's semi-interesting. Keep you mainstream
lil pie hole shut. You act and seem like a complete shallow little perky mainstream piece
of gutter trash that is only going through an odd phase in you young teenage life. Here is
a question... do you ever say anything that ISNT about yourself you self obsessed trashy
whore?

so the world a favor and go stick pour petrol into your "special place" and set it on
fire... hopefully then that is at least a starting attempt to redeem yourself to all of
human kind by the fact the knowledge in knowing you wont be able to spawn more filth upon
this filthy world...

but the sad reality is EVERY DAY I run into someone just like you online and about a month
or so later they are either "punk" or "emo" some even somehow manage to go back to being
"preppy" and brag to their friends about oh how so much "Goth" they were

*takes a deep breath* now that i ahve stated those facts... im going to go get my mornin
coffee for today...

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DeadPunk






PostPosted: 04 Oct 2005 22:56    Post subject: A Poem Reply with quote

Thanks Weebo that was grating on what little nerves I have left..
I've had a gut full of happy and cheerfull, I wish they would die slow and painfull..


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LadySophia






PostPosted: 05 Oct 2005 04:54    Post subject: Re: A Poem Reply with quote

Oh wow, a flame war.....this ought to get interesting. icon_neutral.gif

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weebo






PostPosted: 05 Oct 2005 08:38    Post subject: A Poem Reply with quote

*takes a bow*

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weebo






PostPosted: 05 Oct 2005 08:56    Post subject: A Poem Reply with quote

a message to sexypartygirl

o.k. this is waaaaaaaay to funny...

im haveing problems not laughing...

does the name "Jared Bodine" ring a bell at all???

how about this "Index of /jb464/boo-yeah"

o.k. now here is where it gets intresting "30-Oct-2004" the day that photo was taken you
submitted... oh what do you know it wasnt taken "yesterday" of any day in this year...

how about the time "10:44" which was the time that pic was uploaded onto the net for the
first time???

even more funny... that pic was taken at "Laie : Hawaii : United States"

Next time you submit a bullshit pic of someone and then start pretending its you... make
sure its not on the same forum as me...

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weebo






PostPosted: 05 Oct 2005 16:40    Post subject: Re: A Poem Reply with quote

what?

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weebo






PostPosted: 05 Oct 2005 18:57    Post subject: A Poem Reply with quote

Jared Bodine was the guy who took that photo....

in anotehr thread didnt sexypartygirl say she was form the UK... or her "freind" said they
were "both" from the UK?

Jared Bodine had the following to say:

"Thanks for the extra ping to my site!

The girl in the pic is from Utah, but lives here in Hawaii where I do. I doubt she has
ever been to Europe. The pic was taken by me at a Halloween party on Oct. 31, 2004 here in
Hawaii.

That enough fodder for your fire? Good luck!"

is this where i get given a cookie now?

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DeadPunk






PostPosted: 05 Oct 2005 23:54    Post subject: A Poem Reply with quote

Hands Weebo a big arse cookie of his choosing.. icon_smile.gif

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purplenewrocks






PostPosted: 06 Oct 2005 00:25    Post subject: Re: A Poem Reply with quote

w00t! Go Weebs! icon_biggrin.gif

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LadySophia






PostPosted: 06 Oct 2005 05:02    Post subject: Re: A Poem Reply with quote

*jaw drops* Wow, that was.....really, really good.

*hands over a dozen homemade cookies* Kudos!

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weebo






PostPosted: 06 Oct 2005 08:43    Post subject: A Poem Reply with quote

thankz all ^.^

it actuly was overly simple to get that info lol

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DeadPunk






PostPosted: 06 Oct 2005 09:10    Post subject: A Poem Reply with quote

Most welcome Weebo, easy it may have been but funny to see it was definitely..
Cheers mate.. icon_smile.gif


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weebo






PostPosted: 06 Oct 2005 14:19    Post subject: A Poem Reply with quote

no problems icon_smile.gif

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DeadPunk






PostPosted: 06 Oct 2005 20:41    Post subject: A Poem Reply with quote

Ahh isn't it great Glimmer???

I mean no more annoying little voices..

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DeadPunk






PostPosted: 07 Oct 2005 11:56    Post subject: A Poem Reply with quote

Hmmmmm what are you doing to them Glimmer??

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darkstar






PostPosted: 24 May 2010 06:22    Post subject: Re: A Poem Reply with quote

*bump*

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